Nov. 1st, 2006
First day, first person
Nov. 1st, 2006 07:36 pmIt's the most unmitigated, unforgivable crap I've ever written. It's stilted, it's completely unpaced, and it's flying towards the earth at 9.8 meters per second per second, without even bothering to insert actual story along the way, let alone any descriptions of anything. I thought it was just because nothing had happened yet. But now something's happened, and... it's even worse, because something's happening, and it's even worse.
And I've just worked out why.
It wants to be in first person.
I don't want it to be in first person. I hate reading first person, and I've already done a major first-person work, solely because it made it easier to distinguish two POVs. And I hate reading first person. It feels like lazy third person limited to me.
But okay, Mr. Novel, sir. You want to be in first person - you can be in first person.
Damn you.
1095 words and counting.
Edit: and straight up to 1607 in 20 minutes, of course. Seeing it took me over two hours for 1000 words, making 1st person triple the speed for actual possibly not completely totally rubbish stuff... I think I know which I'll be chosing. :D But now my inner editor's totally desperate to fix the first 1000 words. *twitches*
Edit 2: Final word count for today: 2,503. Most respectable. And by 11:30pm, too!
And I've just worked out why.
It wants to be in first person.
I don't want it to be in first person. I hate reading first person, and I've already done a major first-person work, solely because it made it easier to distinguish two POVs. And I hate reading first person. It feels like lazy third person limited to me.
But okay, Mr. Novel, sir. You want to be in first person - you can be in first person.
Damn you.
1095 words and counting.
Edit: and straight up to 1607 in 20 minutes, of course. Seeing it took me over two hours for 1000 words, making 1st person triple the speed for actual possibly not completely totally rubbish stuff... I think I know which I'll be chosing. :D But now my inner editor's totally desperate to fix the first 1000 words. *twitches*
Edit 2: Final word count for today: 2,503. Most respectable. And by 11:30pm, too!